by Carlos Vasquez
Do you feel brave? Do you believe in ghost or do you think of it as superstion? Well how about this: November you and a few freinds go to the abandoned insane asylum at the corner of Edith and Osana. It is now a private property to an couple. Legend tells that a patient went so mad that when he escaped he had murdered other patients and staff workers. When people enter the building with the owners permision an eerie dark cloud will appear and follow the intruders.
If a little dark cloud doesn't scare you how about a little trip to Hanger Lake by Las Cruces? Here the dead can be seen in this building. The residents of Hanger Lake have noticed some demonic activity.
So do you fear the unnatural? Do you now believen that there is something out there without reason? Or do you want to have your own experience with the dead? Only the brave and fearless will brave these places. Are you one of them?
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Some people tell me that when someone you love dies and you can't let go of thier death the person will comfort you for a while. Though when the spirit wants to go to its reward and you still haven't gotten over thier death a evil spirit will take thier place and almost scare you out of missing them.
I think that is really scary. I think that the dead will stay here in our world because they have "unfinished buiseness" or unresolved issues so they stay as ghosts or spirits. I am pretty sure that all ghosts are not evil though. Yes I do belive in ghosts and im superstisious. lol
This is off subject, but a really creepy place to go see is the bottemless lakes its really cool and scary. Sorry I no off subject.
~Nichole Estrada~
I do believe in ghosts, although I would be scarred if I saw a real one i would be really scared. Youyr article is good you are a very good writer.
-Sarah Phillips
No way!!! that stuff is here in cruces! i wanna check that out!
Really cool how do you find out bout this?
amazing job! i loved your begining and how you started out with the question "do you believe in ghosts? or do you believe it is a superstition?" great job on your ending! the sentence "so do you fear the unnatural?" made me really think about that question. your second paragraph was very good too. i liked how you started out with the question of "if a little black cloud doesnt scare you how about you take a trip to Hanger Lake were you can see the dead." keep up the good work
DIZ STORY IZ TIGHT YO BUT WHERE IZ DAT AT??
Dude this is sick! there were a couple of typos but u got me interested. you provided me with a non bias question gave me stories to persuade me to think like you, and u did. Great Job!
this story is scary and well thought out but CARLOS you need to work on UR SPELLING.I think it is cool.
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